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 Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07

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PostSubject: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:37 pm


http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/56997540/

Blarg, screwed up this picture. I'm redoing it right now. It's a fanart of Fire Emblem, see my deviantart for more info on what I did wrong and why it looks wrong :p




Uhhh ya, probably my first inspiration to actually start committing myself to drawing something haha. I have two other incomplete drawings. My scanner is bad... Anyhow, don't mind the bad shading and those stupid words behind her... those are something else. Uhhh, ya... enjoy ^^;;

man deviantart lags. here's the link to the pic on deviantart

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53466523/

things missing: Her right arm, the hands!! >.< and detailed shading.....


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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Apr 18, 2007 3:41 pm

The shading reminds me of the official Zelda art. I wanna see more of your stuff. punch
Hey, have I ever seen you during one of the meetings? And what do you look like?
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:16 pm

ehhh, no idea how to describe myself, I'll make it to the meeting for a few moments if I'm not busy this week.... Did you make it to the last meeting? I was there...
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:44 pm

Pretty~ The pose and the hair for some reason reminds me of another picture I saw. It's kinda wierd...like...they're almost exactly the same. Almost. xP

But that means its cool! hyper
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:47 pm

ya, I modeled it after a picture lol. Since I'm just beginning, I can't really be original yet...

I'm so not used to drawing yet.... T.T

I just realized I forgot to finish drawing the neck as well, it's weird...

Ya, I'll have to redraw this on a better paper when I have time >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Apr 18, 2007 11:37 pm

Ahaha...ah, no wonder. But that's okay! Practicing is a good thing! This way you can get better. bow
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Wed Jun 06, 2007 6:15 pm

Updated 6/6/07
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:59 am

nice. continue to add freedom to your lines. like go "swoosh" with the pencil with hair and clothing folds. :D you have a skill for drawing hands... O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Fri Jun 15, 2007 9:46 pm

Like Agnes said, you can go "SWOOSH" with your pencil when you make lines, especially in the hair and clothes (like the cape). Plus, it makes it fun that way. xP I just love going swoosh with the pencil. SWOOSH.

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Yeah, you draw good hands! But make them just a tad bit bigger next time (like as big as the face at least...at most? Around that range I guess)
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Fri Jun 15, 2007 10:44 pm

haha, I know the hands are small, that's why I'm redrawing this. There is a reason this is my scrap :p anyhow, the hand caused me to erase like 10 times before I got it down haha...

Too bad my scanner broke.... hope my digital camera will do >.>;;
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:15 am

nice pics~ the girl is cute ^^
the shape of the guy's scalp is kind of off. too much hair near the character's left side(or the pic's right side)
if you used reference pics, it'd be nice if you posted them so we can help give you any other pointers
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:33 am

oh uhh, thanks but I put these up because I actually know what's wrong with them haha... oops

there's a reason I put them in my scraps. I think I posted what was wrong with them on deviantart....
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:59 pm

oo, icic, my bad. i didn't read ur DA comment
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PostSubject: Re: Han's Scraps (finally...) UPDATE - 6/6/07   Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:18 pm

it's okay. I'm still a newb at drawing ^__^
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