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 Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!

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PostSubject: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Thu Mar 15, 2007 8:49 pm

http://betradom.deviantart.com/art/Pattra-Arka-Chapter-1-65463908

yay, managed to update and change a lot of things. Story is at the link. Enjoy!


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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:49 pm

http://betradom.deviantart.com/art/WIP-Chapter-1-Part-1-65463908

Please visit and comment ^^;; I'll appreciate it.


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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Mon May 14, 2007 8:29 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sat Sep 22, 2007 2:20 pm

Okay, finally updated. This will be a story I'll be working on in my spare time lol.... >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sat Sep 22, 2007 2:56 pm

ooo nice opening! It caught my interest. Good job with the imagery, especially of the city Metih.
I can't help but think Elu is such a cute name! xD I wonder why the tree shrunk when Elu touched it? Was it to absorb energy or something? And how these characters and organizations(The Stars& Half-stars, manipulators of elements, the Gem Lord & Keepers) connect with each other. I wonder which group Elu and Reaver are part of? Or maybe they're part of another group no yet mentioned.
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sat Sep 22, 2007 3:32 pm

thanks, those questions will eventually be answered. Its just gonna take a while since this story is in medias res.

I got Elu from a translation of green into Sanskrit hehe ^^;;

whoops I found a typo.... *fixes it*

*Updated*
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:01 pm

(Small Update, I'll be adding the completed parts to the first post with a "***" to signify the division of the parts and also to my deviantart; so this is sort of like previews >.>)


Elu walked down an alleyway strewn with rotten food and week old garbage stacks. The smell was heavy and unnerving, unbearable for an average person. Flies flew all over the place and tried to approach Elu.

I think that person told me it was here, Elu thought as he glanced at a rundown cardboard shack leaning against a wall. He walked towards the shack's entrance as dead flies began to pile up around him.

An old man stood within the entrance and pointed a strangely shaped sword at Elu. “Don't come any nearer, you dirt,” he wheezed. His face looked pitiful yet a certain dignity remained in it.
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:59 pm

*updated- added another chunk* Check deviantart for better looking version (Italics for thoughts) since forum uses different tag than deviantart

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PostSubject: 0.0   Sun Sep 30, 2007 12:04 pm

*points to comment on DA*
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:06 am

Changed the stylization of some things. Change some of the beginning. Added a new chunk. Chapter 1 is almost complete I hope... Enjoy! Once Chapter 1 is complete, I'll upload the whole chapter to Deviantart. =)

(The "****" divides the new section from the old).
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PostSubject: Re: Pattra Arka- Chapter 1 Updated!   Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:13 am

Update 1/18/08

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